To get a good job today it is more important for children to study mathematics and foreign languages than art and music. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
it is argued by many that, in order to compete in the job market, children have to focus on studying math and international languages rather than learning arts-based subjects. this essay totally agrees with this idea because almost every job requires good math-solving skill and those who master languages can easily impress any employers.
A great ability to solve complicated math equations and calculation is an essential requirement of every well-paid job. this is to say that problems involving math occur every day in all businesses and the employers want these issues to be solved. For example, bankers must have fast reflexes to number calculation to deal with customers’ money correctly and immediately regardless of the help of computer technology in the banking system or else, they are not fit to work in the bank.
Another reason is that job recruiters will prioritize potential candidates who can speak fluent foreign languages to work for their company. this is because the majority of businesses have grown internationally and their clients come from everywhere around the world. Therefore, employers are more desired to have employees who can support customers in their native languages. For instance, local hospitals in Ho Chi Minh City are now open to foreigners staying in town and the medical staff is required a certain level of English to communicate.
In conclusion, it is not biased but indeed essential for children to only concentrate on mathematics and international languages while they are studying at school rather than music and drawing because the job market is mostly available to people who possess amazing math skill and speak foreign languages fluently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31481481481 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89780438146 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9065677903 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239367191056 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837411310981 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065568164232 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147462344559 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717997803107 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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