To get a good job today it is more important for children to study mathematics and foreign languages than art and music. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Getting employment offer these days has become a challenge. Some analysts have the notion that children have to be taught arithmetic and other languages especially languages of remote countries while the other critics believe that music and art are important. In this essay, i would like to vindicate that knowledge in maths and multiple languages are prefered more when compared with the contradicting opinion.
Experts suggest parents to provide their children with understanding in multiple languages and in calculations. With the growth of technology and computers, additional job offers are available in information technology field, which needs expertise in calculations. And also, official communication with other country people makes use of foreign languages. For example, call center employees highly exploit non-native languages for speaking. if the programmers, don't have a right understanding of the formulae and arithmetic methods, they cannot frame programs. Seen in this light, the certitude that growing kids ought to be tutored other langauges and mathematics is proved.
However, there is an opposite contemplation that little children have to be preached with drawing, painting and music. Marvellous paintings have great resale value. they can also be exhibited. For example, people of the upper class society are more passionate about having fantastic paintings in their homes and are ready to buy them for a huge cost for the sake of social prestige.
In addition, an increasing number of people are attracted towards rhythms and tunes. What would be the result if a youngster is given two tickets and asked to opt one where one is for viewing a circus show and the other is for attending a music concert? He would obviously choose music concert as his choice. For example, many surveys have an outcome that a large percentage of the growing population are pulled towards music. Hence, the children have to be taught art and music.
In conclusion, the opinion that children should acquire understanding in maths and other languages has overweighed the cogitation that they have to be taught art and music as the former are not only used in work place but also applied in banks, shops, tourism and various aspects of life. Without mathematics and other languages, it is difficult for a person to carry out his life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28609625668 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81222543787 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553475935829 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0121914047 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.85 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237568834028 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673226700612 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435113546509 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135417116456 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297688943289 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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