Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates.
What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions?
The human race has faced and survived many challenges in the past centuries. However, none has been as unprecedented as global warming that is threatening human existence in this century with the associated worrying elevations of ocean levels. In this essay, some challenges that this pose and practical measures to overcome them will be submitted.
The biggest challenge global warming seems to pose is the extremely unpleasant weather conditions from the depletion of the ozone layer, worsened by fewer rainfalls. As a consequence, extreme weather events like tornado, thunderstorms and heat waves occur more frequently. These conditions have killed many in Malaysia while rendering millions homeless. Furthermore, ocean levels have risen in many regions of the world with many nations in the coastal axis submerged. To illustrate, Mumbai witnessed the highest rise in sea levels in 2019 with floods and loss of lives and properties.
Though these challenges are disturbing, measures to overcome them are not far-fetched. There is a need for a global call to action to reduce energy use. The energy consumed at home and work contributes to increased levels of carbon dioxide. When fossil fuels burn, greenhouse gases are generated, the release to the atmosphere of which depletes the ozone layer. Governments can legislate the use of electric cars and green energy like solar power in industries. Besides, deforestation should be banned to protect the ecosystem and preserve the human race.
In conclusion, extreme weather conditions and submergence of the coastal are obvious threats posed by global warming. Concerted global efforts to substitute the use of green energy for fossil fuels and protection of forests are viable measures to protect man from the menace of global warming. 280 words.
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- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people Do the advantages of the situation outweigh the disadvantages 85
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or a shortage of money Others agree that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your a 89
- Some people believe that to give opportunities to the new generation companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire Do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people think it is the best to save money for example in a bank or savings scheme Other people feel that money should be spent whenever it is available Discuss these views and give your opinion 49
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...endering millions homeless. Furthermore, ocean levels have risen in many regions ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43971631206 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83196382635 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9324674818 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183402729806 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497382281714 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518504221293 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106800106229 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616547882991 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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