In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities.
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
More and more companies are being encouraged by the government to relocate from urban areas to rural environments in an attempt to tackle some problems such as traffic congestion and air pollution in the cities, as well as to provide incentives for people in local areas. If successful, the population might be favoured so much that the disadvantages would be rarely noticed.
Examining some probable issues associated with relocation, one would notice a few things. While I acknowledge that there may accommodation problem for workers due to relocation to strange environments, the Industries or, perhaps, the government could build shelters for them. More so, it is likely that some staff may prefer to be travelling to these long-distance areas everyday, which could cost a fortune. However, this transportation cost could be minimized by providing staff buses for such people. So, although there would be a few unwanted situations, they can be remedied with proper plan.
As well as the above minor merits, relocating industries to less-developed areas, on the flipside, has major advantages. First and foremost, cars which are the primary sources of traffic congestion and air pollution in urban areas, would be reduced, thereby resulting in decongestion of roads and availability of clean air. Also worthy to note is the possible increase in social amenities in local towns, leading to gradual civilization and development of such environments. Most importantly, many students who are in small cities probably would enjoy benefits such as scholarships and all-expense-paid holidays by businesses to big cities.
In conclusion, relocating industries and businesses to remote places may result in some unserious issues, on the one hand. On the other hand, this development appears to favour not only the vast majority of urban road users but also residents in small areas. These advantages overshadow the disadvantages
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...or people in local areas. If successful, the population might be favoured so much...
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Suggestion: would rarely be
...favoured so much that the disadvantages would be rarely noticed. Examining some probable is...
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...travelling to these long-distance areas everyday, which could cost a fortune. However, ...
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...y, which could cost a fortune. However, this transportation cost could be minimi...
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Suggestion: Also,
...of roads and availability of clean air. Also worthy to note is the possible increase...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44666666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1336879232 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4654917899 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14315219247 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050924888021 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414326086301 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904188184398 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304324597703 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.