Globalization has brought about more positive economic impacts than negative ones. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Due to enhancement of international trade, relationships with foreign countries have been strengthened. Consequently, the fiscal growth has also been benefitted massively, however some hold opposite opinion. I partially agree with the former because the contrary sides cannot be ignored. The essay will scrutinize the benefits and drawbacks in the subsequent paragraphs before venturing to a logical conclusion.
Collection of foreign reserves is one of the colossal positive traits of international trade as the transactions are conducted only in American dollars, which improves the foreign exchange reserve of the country. Another crucial impact is development of infrastructure, which is also made possible due to the emergence of foreign direct investments in a country. For Example, the Delhi metro line which is set up by foreign direct investment received from Japan is India's first fastest local train network. Therefore, globalization is considered a virtue because it has brought a lot of changes to the economy of a country.
Paradoxically, interdependency on resources has been raised with the setup of global markets where every state has some requirement from others. It not only ends the self-sufficiency of a nation, but also allows some trade-oriented regions to overtake the international market. The best example is China supplying all the major products at cheap rates to almost every country in order to suppress the local traders of those nations. As a result, most of the underdeveloped nations cannot boost their financial development.
To encapsulate, despite the negatives of globalization, its positives certainly have an edge. If policies are made to restrict the drawbacks of it, then it will be more fruitful than it is now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t will be more fruitful than it is now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51291512915 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28334913324 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6752952504 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115322556144 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359212422714 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034330324107 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646022730977 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281141653691 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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