Government investment in the arts,such as music and threatre,is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by some that the government spending of money on arts such as music and threatre is a waste and so government should channel such funds on public services. In my opinion, I agree that most of the government allocation should be invested on public services.
There are several reasons why the government ought to spend more money on public services such as schools, hospitals and electricity. Firstly, education is the key to development of a country, therefore, of schools are built and equipped with learning materials, this will encourage poor people to go to school to learn in a conducive environment.As a result, it will attract people from other countries to study in that society and this will boost the income of that country.
Secondly, hospitals that are fully equipped with necessary machines will discourage it's citizens from traveling to other countries to seek medical care. Moreso, this will enable more research to be carried out in order to produce vaccine for unforseen diseases. For instance, a global pandemic that occur early this year 2020, affected many Nations and countries that have better hospital facilities were able to control the spread and those with underdeveloped hospitals recorded high mortality rate.
Finally, constant electricity supply means more factories Will manufacture their products anytime of the day and this will in turn attract more industrial establishment and creation of job opportunities for the residents.
In conclusion, government investment on public services are very crucial for the the well-being of the citizens and also economical growth of that country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34362934363 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87340669997 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0736934252 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.777777778 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8888888889 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24799018214 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118069022789 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122921415186 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147695499275 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139471343153 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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