Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, the rate of crime is ever increasing ,even many countries have raised concern. While it is considered by some that the effective method to reduce crime is to prolong jail sentence, others argue that there are other measures that can put in place to curd the menace. Although both views have valid points that are worth discussing, I think other method should be explored.
On the one hand,some people believe that link jail terms act as a form of rehabilitation for the offenders. In other words, criminals are place on various training in the prison yard involving hard labour which would re-orientate and deter them from subsequent offence.when they are released to join the society. For instance, a study done in New Zealand by the criminal investigation agency showed that long prison term led to reduction in crime over 2 decades to 0.2%. Therefore, enforcing long prison sentence would discourage intending criminals to stay away from crime.
On the other hand, some individuals cited other alternative measures to combat crime rate which I agree. First and foremost, criminals ought to be subjected to community service. This is an opportunity for the offenders to give back to the society positively. For example,in india criminals are forced to sweep the streets and dispose waste of residents. Thus, crime had decreased drastically. Furthermore, provision of youth centre can engage them not to get involved in crime.
In conclusion, although both arguments have goods reason for and against long prison stay,I think other methods to reduce crime should be explore.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-10-12 | Jatin sheoran | 56 | view |
| 2021-10-12 | Jatin sheoran | 56 | view |
| 2021-10-12 | Jatin sheoran | 56 | view |
| 2021-03-09 | Rehana Diwan | 67 | view |
| 2021-01-24 | Chirag Bhardwaj | 84 | view |
- Some people think that the main factors influencing a child s development these days are things such as television friends and music Others believe that the family still remains more important Discuss both opinions and give your opinion 61
- You work in a gym but you are not a qualified gym instructor A friend has written to you for advice on how to get fit and healthier Write a letter to your friend offering some suggestions In your letter remind your friend that you are not an instructor of 73
- Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school Other working parents think the family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children Discuss both views an 56
- Some people believe that studying at the University or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school Other working parents think the family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children Discuss both views an 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
These days, the rate of crime is ever increasing ,even many countries...
^^
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s, the rate of crime is ever increasing ,even many countries have raised concern...
^^
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... rate of crime is ever increasing ,even many countries have raised concern. Whil...
^^
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...d should be explored. On the one hand,some people believe that link jail terms act...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the society. For instance, a study done in New Zealand by the criminal investiga...
^^
Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...k to the society positively. For example,in india criminals are forced to sweep the...
^^^
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... reason for and against long prison stay,I think other methods to reduce crime sho...
^^
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'explored'?
Suggestion: explored
...other methods to reduce crime should be explore.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18992248062 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72064586955 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624031007752 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8808684081 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6428571429 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261626544447 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815532529619 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559666185746 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158783020295 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030351289716 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.