The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that the growing market share of online shopping will one day wipe out the existence of brick and morter shops. However, I do not agree to the idea that online shopping can completely take over the traditional way of shopping.
Although placing an order online is more convienient and less time consuming, it can never replace the experience of going out to a mall or a market and making the purchase. Buying things physically have a theraputic effect on people. Some call it retail-therapy.
Some people till date prefer to go to a shop and physically touch and feel the item. For Example, it is difficult to know the quality and feel of the fabric without holding the garment. The product might look good on the screen but the hand of the material can only be known by being physically present.
Malls and market streets also serves as a place to relax and enjoy with friends and family. Teenagers specially like to go to a mall and have fun with their mates. Such enclosed areas provides a safe space and people do not have to worry about the traffic and bad weather. It does not matter if it is snowing or raining, one can still enjoy without getting cold or drenched.
In conclusion, online shopping can never replace the traditional brick and morter shops because people will always need safe places to go and have fun, enjoy with their family and friends. Additonally, shopping online does not allow customers to guess the quality of the material just by looking through their devices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75471698113 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46043523488 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57358490566 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3045168887 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192483950973 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609349891547 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752608138109 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113907680256 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106933183888 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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