Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
Money plays a very important part in people's life. It is a common belief that having lot of it is the main cause of happiness in life. In my opinion, though money can buy things that will bring a lot of joy in one's life, there are other many other ways to be happy.
In today's world, money is something everyone needs to lead a life. And having a lot of it will certainly ensure the most luxurious experience one can have. People can purchase the end of the line products with the best possible features. On top of that, one can plan for the most extravagant holiday destinations and travel in top-notch business class coaches. Thus, money can buy happiness.
However, a lot of money is not the only way to be happy, there are other things that are equally important like job satisfaction and having a work-life balance. It is essential to have a job which fulfils the need of passion for work. Having a balance between job-related work and family life is also important.
In conclusion, not only having monetary power important to enjoy high-end life full of comfort and easy but having job satisfaction and support of the loved ones are equally important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... things that will bring a lot of joy in ones life, there are other many other ways t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, in conclusion, in my opinion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64734299517 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5313825275 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2283182648 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414566232103 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154052473807 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935123813403 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250522824068 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14115296994 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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