If an individual acts in an anti-social way, such as committing a crime, then society is blamed for such behavior. What are the causes behind such behavior? Who should be responsible for this?
No person in this world is a born criminal.It is the surroundings where he/she is leaving,types of people and their own bad experiences or sufferings make them think to commit a crime.Soceity doesn't play direct role,but it happens sometime in an indirect way.
Poverty is another reason.People do various crimes,mostly theft due to the lack of money.Other crimes involve murder,rape,stealing valuables and many more.India is considered as one of the most populated city in the world.Unfortunatley,every person does not get a privilege to study or to earn.Poors are becoming more poor because they do not get enough facilities.This makes them to commit crime for their survival and to satisfy family's needs.
For example,there was a thief name "Veerappan"who used to do sell sandle wood illegally for many years and still government could not do much to catch him.He was not involved in such crimes from the very tender age. Due to unemployment,he and his acquaintances were involved in such a work which was harmful for society.
Secondly,political leaders can also be blamed equally for the mishap activities in the country.Their failure to cater the public is another reason for such situation.They do not care whether everyone is getting an opportunity,funds,employment,medical help and much more.
Movies also play some role indirectly.Many uneducated people take inspiration from movies that shows how to conduct a crime.Movies should be made to entertain people,not to make them believe that one can get whatever they want by hook or crook.
In conclusion,ruling authorities in the country and unemployment are mainly responsible in an indirect way and serious steps should be taken to overcome this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44776119403 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.18403227593 2.80592935109 149% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634328358209 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.8356706656 49.4020404114 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.571428571 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2857142857 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235682381064 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111239575451 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488501425426 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11391727261 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558614510633 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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