It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society.
It is clear that media use has been gradually become a subject of debatable topics in recent decades because of its effects on human life. Although some claim that there are many limitations of media, benefits that it bestows to societies are significant.
On the one hand, there are some disadvantages of media. First, it negatively effects on development of social skills. In fact, spending too much time on media is the expense of lacking of emotional connection and face-to-face communication which drives to many interaction-related issues for people, especially children. Second, apart from eye-related problems, some mental illnesses are also linked with heavy consumption of social media. For instance, some kinds of social networks, including Facebook, Twitter and Instagram, have detrimental effects on human brain since using of these platforms exacerbates anxiety and depression that impacts to our sleep which causes severe health problems.
On the other hand, media definitely contributes to stimulating development of societies. First, the main advantage of media is that it has significantly improved the connectivity. Actually, thanks to technological advancements, media use is an efficient way to communicate with other people regardless of the location, which help to keep in touch with the old friends who already relocated to the other side of the world. Second, media also bestows many benefits to development of education. For example, by taking the modern educational methods, such as distance learning and e-learning courses, people who cannot afford to get their higher degree due to some reasons are allowed to pursue their education that makes their lives better.
In conclusion, given that there still have downsides, development of media is imperative to development of human race. Consuming media accurately ensures human can obtain its net positive benefit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an can obtain its net positive benefit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, so, still, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60553633218 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.046319304 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60553633218 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2952865258 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173540791269 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718307067159 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469568853671 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10676105458 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120844906454 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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