It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you think it is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?
Many people are arguing that the media is covering so much of violence in their news briefing that is impacting the teenager's mindset and is resulting in higher crime rate among them. I also find this argument holds some ground, but we cannot account media solely for this. Whereas, at the same time, I firmly believe that some regulation on media is required those I will be discussing in the latter part of the essay.
Nowadays, there are abundance of violent content available in media weather it is electronic, print and social platform that to it is accessible to younger's as well. At this age they are vulnerable and can be manipulated easily, since they have been watching such violent news on several platforms and may get provoked and can find doing crime a fascinating stuff like snatching goods and drug or alcohol consumption. For example, in year 2010, a group of five juvenile caught for robbing an elderly couple and later it came out in interrogation that they were inspired by a news, where a criminal used to steal jewelry of aged people to full fill his expenses.
Although, media is a referred as the pillar of democracy and it has to free so that it can bring the truth in front of the society but sometimes this freedom misused by them like making story catchier and spicier and fill it with violence and action. For instance, many news channels are dramatizing the entire crime story and present them in a way that it is an adventure and here teenagers find it so tempting and may opt path of crime. Therefore, some of measures like allowing violence related news to be telecasted only after 10PM and print such news with disclaimer and verify the age of user while streaming such news on social platform.
In conclusion, there are many contributing factors in surge of juvenile crime and showing violence in media and its reach to younger audience is also one of them. So, to prevent this, regulatory authorities should consider measures discussed as above for betterment of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
...eir news briefing that is impacting the teenagers mindset and is resulting in higher crim...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the measures') or simply say ''some measures''.
Suggestion: some of the measures; some measures
...g and may opt path of crime. Therefore, some of measures like allowing violence related news to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56199698896 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565714285714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.867515491 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.090909091 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8181818182 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227020039495 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824233773644 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386157009288 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139042192129 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00300555111635 0.056905535591 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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