In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous people being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media have no right privacy.
To what extent do you agree?
It is often believed that due to attention given to popular people, they lost privacy in their lives. I completely agree with the statement because people want to get updated about famous people life and compromising the privacy put extra pressure on those famous stars.
Firstly, in general, public is always interested about celebrities' lifestyle. That is to say that not only people want to know about their life, but also want to copy them in reality. To provide this information to public, media always try to find the footprints of public figures, and often steps into their private life. To illustrate, a constant telecasting of a famous couple, Virat and Anushka, was came in limelight. After few incidents, this couple had expressed their anger publicly, about compromisation of their privacy rights. That is why, it should be a common sense for the public and media to not infiltrate the life of celebrities.
Further, excessive public attention adds extra pressure on a celebrity. Nevertheless to mention that whenever a top-grade people get recognized among masses, expectation of public with that person on top are increased. To cop up with that, they have to put tremendous efforts in their respective trade and if they fail to achieve that they feel performance pressure which further leads into long-term stress. For instance, a famous actor, Sushant Singh, suicided due to loss of contracts of upcoming projects. This was mainly because of the stress he felt from his fans. Thus, it is important to give personal space to famous people to avoid any unfortunate happening to famous people.
To conclude, I still agree with the scenario because privacy should not be compromised of anyone and extra interference can put pressure on the famous people which can be fatal sometimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...a famous couple, Virat and Anushka, was came in limelight. After few incidents, this...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...ion adds extra pressure on a celebrity. Nevertheless to mention that whenever a top-grade pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, for instance, in general, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12203389831 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72860510837 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3072955048 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.733333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206195803344 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647117097737 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687571989736 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1440884545 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444904843883 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.