The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. Do you agree or disagree?
In the fast paced era, particularly in the last decade there are enormous shocking revolutionery changes have occured. One of it is a make shift of world dominancy from older people to new generation. Some people assert the idea that companies are better led by mature and experienced people. Whereas other group presents the idea that the world is in better hands of fresh blood. I will discuss both perspectives in detail and share my opinion in the end.
It is an undeniable fact that the mature and old people are far more thoughtful, long sighted and rational as compared to young people. Moreover, with time people gain experience, learn from their mistakes and pave the way for companies to prospoer for longer time. Multinationals should be run by older people as they are convicted, well-thought and intellectual. There are evident examples of this phenomenon such as Bill Gates or Steve Jobs run the world leading companies.
Nonetheless, young generation is no less than experienced professionals. They have a fresh mindset, and think out of the box. New professionals think innovatively and have futuristic approach towards life. There are many examples of successful organizations being run by young leader. For instance Facebook was a simple idea well-thought in a room by three partners. Now run by Mark Zuckerberg counted to be one of the progressive organization in the world.
In my opinion, i am more inclinced towards the latter idea. The future beholds the value for new blood. I agree that older people keep things straight and in-line with their experience and realistic approach but Mid-aged have the approach and mindset of long term world revolution. Hence, It is fairly predicted that world would be solely driven by the young generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, whereas, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10652920962 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90396510116 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7341383093 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2105263158 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221094742538 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603238901347 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689532596835 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126669386387 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232264562192 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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