4. Some think dangerous extreme sports such as skydiving and rock climbing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary global landscape, with the ever-growing popularity of extreme sports such as skydiving or rock climbing, there has been a debate about whether these sports should be banned for safety reasons. While I endorse the risks associated with it, I firmly disagree with a complete ban on these sports as it impacts adversely not only on the adventurers but also on a specific country's economy.
Predominantly, choosing an extreme sport is one's personal choice which should not be taken away. Prohibiting dangerous sports will restrict one's freedom of choice which is a fundamental human right. Many people have a dream of attempting such sports once in their lifetime and they are willing to pay a hefty amount to satisfy their inner desires. To tackle the situation in a rational way, authorities can propose an alternate way of introducing strict guidelines to follow rather than taking such a stringent action.
Furthermore, extreme sports such as skydiving or rock climbing are one of the main revenue streams under tourism revenues. Many adventure enthusiasts get attached to such destinations that offer such sports significantly boosting the economy. Many country's tourism revenue is heavily dependent on these sports. Hence, implementing a ban will negatively affect the economic gain, subsequently impacting the overall economic situation.
Nonetheless, the risks pertinent to these sports cannot be overlooked. However, a reasonable approach is to proactively manage and prepare a mitigation plan to eliminate these risks. These plans include detailed guidelines, mandatory training, and a checklist of proper equipment before attempting.
To conclude, these extreme sports hold substantial value in the tourism industry due to its uniqueness. However, the restriction will lead to a revenue impact on tourism financial gain and discomfort for many adventurous people.
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Consider replacing "in a rational way" with adverb for "rational"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57093425606 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00748777204 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3720713197 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246329395653 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791858239348 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794938849581 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125552757159 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734685448499 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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