Leaving Country & Living Abroad
With the immense growth in population and unmanaged governance in a country, living a peaceful & balance life has become quite a big hurdle for individuals. Pros and cons are always there, so making a decision vary from person to person and what are their priorities in life. Mostly people leave their country just to provide a good lifestyle to their family.
One the benefit of moving abroad is the assurance of having basic necessities of life, which is quite difficult in third world countries. Multiple factors needs to be considered while making a decision which includes lack of security, clean water and electricity etc. In a country like ours, security is a major concern: where law and order is not maintained and implemented, whereas in developed countries the case is totally opposite. Safety and security plays a vital role in making a mind to move abroad.
As there are many advantages of living abroad, there are some disadvantages as well which most of the people don’t realize before leaving. One of them is the loneliness they feel after leaving their country. A family-oriented person feels difficulty and nostalgic while staying alone. Family gathering during cultural festivals and other occasions can put him in depression.
So in my opinion if a person’s priority is to provide luxuries and security to his/her family and does not care about the cultural festivals or religious difference. Then moving to other country will be a wise decision else priorities should be adjusted prior to decision.
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- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 61
- Art is considered as an essential part of all cultures throughout the world.However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.Why do you think that is?What could be done to encourage more pe 56
- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
- Parents should not pressure their children 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...oving abroad is the assurance of having basic necessities of life, which is quite difficult in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, third, well, whereas, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83071023417 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5259718313 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0769230769 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18876309625 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569236994829 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518302654215 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989464530674 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349273849523 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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