In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Excess of anything can leads to an undesirable outputs. Similarly, people with high earning can become the cause of disturbance in a country. However, there are numerous benefits from the rich people that cannot be ignored. We will dig further into these two points below.
But before going in details, one should keep in mind that pros and cons are always there.
One of the main advantage that cannot be neglected is the number of jobs generated from the business initiated by the well established and highly salaried group. They open an investment channel for the country. Some business man become ideal for children which helps and motivate children in their education. Among these, some of them are great enough that they are supporting many poor families on their own expenses. These kind of activities needs to be highlighted among the rich, because many of them are unaware of the potential of being rich and they waste their money in their luxurious life.
Despite multiple benefits, this uneven distribution of wealth can cause several problems. According to the global survey conducted recently, the poverty rate has been raised up to 63% worldwide, which is much higher than the previous year. There is also an increase in criminal activity because of change in poverty rate. Low salaried people are involving themselves in an illegal direction to fulfill their basic needs. Another key point is the improper usage of wealth, people with excessive amount may sponsor illegal activities for their business needs.
In my opinion, government should create a balance among these two entities. And they should keep a check and complete monitoring of money trail. Furthermore, a basic wage protection for individuals should be introduced to avoid poverty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
Excess of anything can leads to an undesirable outputs. Similarly, p...
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Line 4, column 420, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ge in poverty rate. Low salaried people are involving themselves in an illegal direction to f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, similarly, so, well, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17421602787 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54949904252 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5634912021 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185582127454 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558433839435 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568858092085 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922368434068 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499604163573 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.