Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
In today’s world, often seen as a global village, immigration has become a common phenomenon. Along with this come a number of unwelcome consequences such as social and practical issues, with which immigrants need to deal. I believe these problems are inevitable for the newcomers to a country.
Regarding social problems, the foremost one would be found in everyday communication. This is because the majority of individuals who leave their homes in search of a better place to live are not able to speak in the host country’s language, thereby facing myriad of problems for the smallest things they want to do such as taking a taxi. Although some of these immigrants master the host country’s language, they would encounter some other sort of problems in their daily interactions owing to the cultural differences. A range of instances in this regard could be seen in nations’ body languages. For example, showing a thumb in most of the western countries is to say something is okay or to wish somebody luck. However, it is considered as an insult in a number of eastern countries, and doing so may result in a fight.
Turning to practical issues an immigrant may encounter, finding a job tends to be a major one. Due to various marketing and occupational systems in different countries, it would be a hard and demanding process to find a suitable job in a host country. This being the case, a number of foreigners who cannot find a job would be obliged to turn to crime so as to find a grab of food. Joblessness of foreigners is considered as a serious practical problem for both immigrant and the host country.
Admittedly, we all know people who once have emmigrated to another place and now are running thriving and delightful lives. It demonstrates that the above-mentioned issues would not happen to all. However, a key issue in this regard is that these successful people have emigrated elsewhere when there were immense grounds and potential for catching their goals, because of the lack of workforce and a small number of immigrants.
All in all, it would be an undeniable fact that most of the people who go to other countries to start a new life would suffer from social and practical problems specially during the first months. Therefore, they ought to fasten their belts to acquire the host countries language as perfect as possible and to master a skill which is mostly needed in their destination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 724, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'lucks'.
Suggestion: lucks
...y something is okay or to wish somebody luck. However, it is considered as an insult...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...a job would be obliged to turn to crime so as to find a grab of food. Joblessness of for...
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Line 4, column 399, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...s, because of the lack of workforce and a small number of immigrants. All in all, it would be an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, as to, for example, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8961352657 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92837813343 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9428121469 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.611111111 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132102825907 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405541737005 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362563536131 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705545134974 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236393980121 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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