In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What are the causes of these problems and what measure could be taken to solve them?
One of the most widely-discussed issues surrounding modern life is the ever-rising weight of individuals along with the decrease in their general health. To tackle this problem, the roots should be ascertained first, then appropriate solutions need to be carried out.
The foremost cause with regard to this matter would be the sedentary lifestyles. For instance, a century ago, people used to hang around the city through walking or riding bicycles. However, nowadays most people wish to be as comfortable as possible; Therefore, they would prefer to go everywhere on their cars. Another notable reason regarding health crisis is the inappropriate eating habits. Now, there appears to be a great inclination toward various kinds of fast food, which are highly greasy and will inevitably jeopardize public health.
So as to combat the above-mentioned challenges, people should be made to have more active lives and salutary eating plans. To catch these goals, more exercise facilities should be installed in public places such as parks. If this step is put into practice, a vast majority of people will be stimulated to have physical activities. To encourage individuals more to exercise, there could be held some matches such as cycling contests with some rewards to be given to the winners. Moreover, authorities should consider producing educational TV programs to teach the society about the benefits of healthy diets, and the deleterious effects of fast food. For example, in a cookery program viewers can be educated how they can make a meal both delicious and healthy.
There has been a decline in the public health of some nations, which is mostly brought about by the wrong lifestyles and eating habits of people. To counteract this key issue, a number of remedies such as facilitating public exercise and educating individuals for having healthier diets are open to us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: To
... inevitably jeopardize public health. So as to combat the above-mentioned challenges, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23102310231 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84211116574 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627062706271 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2980259767 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168853450638 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054341023421 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323326880165 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965246041637 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348408053915 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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