For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology, and business more important than arts.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?
For decades, art was a significant part of defining different cultures around the globe. But, in this contemporary era, people have deviated from art and appreciate practical knowledge such as science and technology and business more. I believe this is a result of the undervaluation of art and practical mentality of people and government and schools can provide solutions to tackle this issue.
Firstly, Today's lives are based on a fast pace to survive and succeed, which are the ultimate goals of every family. This has led people to be entertained and entangled with everyday advancements in subjects like science and technology. As these are the main pathways that define the economic security of people. Secondly, Art, in all of its forms ( Literary, Pictorial, etc) are well undervalued, and often it is seen that artists struggle their daily life until they are well recognized. Moreover, art takes a long time to complete which further increases its burden. A recent survey has published a majority of fresh art graduates are working for minimum wage jobs, unrelated to art.
Furthermore, I believe that people need to be made aware of the art around them and it is the responsibility of the government. They need to implement ways to encourage young artists and improve their careers by opening free exhibitions to illustrate their work to the public. Schools should conduct competitions such as painting, theatre, dance, to spark the interest of the students.
To conclude, the practical knowledge required in today's lives have caused people for stray away from art and attract to sciences and it is the governments' job to help to balance the art values in people's life.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1083032491 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82414321615 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1793987621 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265750762267 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857355639328 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073067802631 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161933931462 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815677147228 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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