There was a time in the past when art was considered to be the most powerful and expressive tool to depict the social, political and economical themes existing then. The renaissance period was in fact known as the rebirth of art itself in the greek culture. Prodigies like DaVinci, Donatello, Raphael were considered to be the greatest artists at their time who also mastered in various other aspects like medicine, engineering and humanities.
But as time progressed slowly into modern times, fields like science, technology and business gained popularity and began evolving into serious professions. Utilitarian form of society started to prevail and more abstract forms of expression like art began to reduce it's affect in people. While art required an undying imagination and lot of skill, fields like science or technology focused more on the intellect and calculations. Given that people who studied in these technical fields started to earn more than that of somebody who excelled in art, people began to shift their expertise.
In the contemporary world, the fields of science, technology have already crosedd many leaps and will cross even more. On the other side of spectrum, Art is something more abstract and limitless. We are yet to explore many forms already existing let alone the undiscovered. In order to engage more people in studying or using art, the rich history of the field should be educated and imagination of the interested ones shouldn't be restricted.
People should be encouraged if they choose their career in art and should beassured that their profession isn't anything less than work done by a scientist, or a doctor, or even an engineer.
- The government s investment in arts music and theatre is a waste of money Governments should invest these funds in public services instead To what extent do you agree with this statement 67
- The bar chart below shows the US top ten processed food export markets 11
- For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world However nowadays people s values have changed and we tend to consider science technology and business more important than arts What do you think are the causes of this 78
- The wealth of a nation is said to depend on the health of its citizens Yet in the modern knowledge based economies of the world education is more and more being seen as the main force in the development of all countries Do you share this view Give reasons 100
- The graph below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to school in 1990 and 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15018315018 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74156676544 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1182371051 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223065910371 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802904762074 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030189638441 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124390032046 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296650140912 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.