Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since there is computer technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that we are on the edge of modern technology. So many people think that maintaining traditional work like managing public libraries when we have the option to manage it through computer technology is a waste of money. I completely disagree with this statement and this essay explains why.
On one hand, supporters of computer technology who wants to manage public libraries like this often argue that maintaining public libraries is a waste of money if we consider our effort and space. Since we have on the era of information technology we should certainly take benefit of it. For example, we have a very strong computer which could store millions of books on its hard drive. So it is a total waste of money if we manage public libraries in a traditional way.
On the other hand, people who want public libraries often say it brings mental peace and satisfaction when we can touch the books. Put simply, a book that can be touched creates more joy than an e-book. For instance, the older generation and people who love traditional style often prefer the public library to computerized technology. Easy to use is the main reason people who prefer public library.
In conclusion, we cannot deny the importance of modern technology but in some cases, we make some exception to make someone comfortable in living their lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey if we consider our effort and space. Since we have on the era of information techn...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a traditional way" with adverb for "traditional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... of money if we manage public libraries in a traditional way. On the other hand, people who want...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89082969432 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71045048432 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558951965066 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8425486192 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230202730191 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902419321688 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831786985415 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134053965394 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921507543642 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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