Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
This is a fact that due to the advancements in medical field innovative ways of preventing diseases are developed by practitioners. It is proved that infants can be treated via vaccines in order to protect against various incurable ailments. It is argued that whether it should be mandated by law to prevent children diseases by giving shots or care takers should choose the way of treatment for kids. According to me it must be mandatory because of several reasons that i am going to cover.
Admittedly, In these days people have to be more conscious about their health as the number for communicable diseases is increasing day by day. First of all, In the toddler age, kids are even unable to express their illness, so their parents are responsible for nurturing their offsprings. However, they need an expert’s advice to test the infection which children have as they can not give them any medicine without taking advice from physicians in oder to ensure good health. Therefore, They can not decide that whether children should get vaccinated or not. Second of all, if parents would choose how to treat children, they may overlook infections to children. Whereas, making it compulsion by law will make sure timely and proper treatment which will not only prevent diseases but also they will have healthy lifestyle.
Additionally, immunizing infants would result in protecting against common infections that assist in curbing many health disorders. For example- In India kids are treated by vaccines that prevents disability among children for their overall development otherwise there is a risk of becoming disable or handicapped as they grow.
To conclude, Although parents have rights for how their children need to be treated, i believe that the vaccinations for some diseases must be mandatory by government by creating laws in order to spread awareness and to make them responsible citizens of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, whereas, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14696485623 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76898582657 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4389446721 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.923076923 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415551063954 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133829166769 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688495347476 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242674371291 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462302404004 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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