As population is growing in many countries, crime rates are also increasing at a faster pace for various reasons. This essay will discuss about the reasons for such growing crime rate and what can be done to alleviate the causes of increasing crime rate.
The reasons for an increased crime rate in many countries is directly linked to the issue of growing population. Firstly, with the growth of population employment opportunities are decreasing. Every specialized field is becoming saturated with specialized people, but employment opportunities are not increasing. Thus, even people with a graduate degree are facing difficulties in finding jobs. Consequently, lack of jobs are forcing people to resort to illegal ways in earning bread for himself and his family. So, lack of employment opportunities is one of the main reasons for spreading crimes. Moreover, nowadays, producing and selling drugs have become commonplace due to the easy accessibility of many technical gears. Due to such availability, more and more people are abusing drugs. Thus, under the influence of drugs, people end up committing crimes that they would not do in a normal state.
To deal with this ever-growing crime rate, the two issues mentioned need to be addressed. To begin, government should emphasize on creating more employment opportunities for the people of his country. With an increased employment opportunity, people will not need to commit crimes to earn bread and money for his family. Furthermore, if stricter rules are enforced against abuse of drugs and more attention are given to rehabilitation for addicted people, crime rates will go down by a lot.
To conclude, it is the ever increasing drug abuse and lack of employment opportunities which is causing the crime rates to grow in many countries. However, if government takes necessary steps to mitigate these issues, crime rates will be at an all time low for the countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23548387097 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97418830032 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7656459673 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.4705882353 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233488875262 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798592262972 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716782773354 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163368493526 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466017324895 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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