The different pattern of criminal issues were reported by media everyday, indicate that such offenece activities are speading dramatically in recent years. Crimes not only take place in some deprived developing countries but some developed countries due to various factors. In my point of view, the citizens should principles the moral rules to get rid of crime, and the local authorities need take action to educate people to avoid commit into crime.
The reasons of thy people commit to crime are complex. but the major two reason are obvious. Firstly, the gap between rich and poor is getting wider and wider everyday in some developing countries. Some youth from deprived family tend to gain fortune by some illegal ways, and the internet hacker is the one which people use the computer virus to hack into the victim's bank account to make the crime. Unfortunately, Such crime is always been reported by mass media and more teenagers tend to learn it. Another factor we have to face is there are more less educated people in some developing countries, the lack of the knowledge of law contribute the increase of crime rate. It is widely reported that the burglary take place in some Africa and middle east developing countries but less happened in west developed countries. These evidence prove education play a significant role in the proof of crime.
As the crime cases are increase fast. We should take some effective measures to slow or stop this trend. First, the cutting edge safety technology will help to proof some kinds of crimes. Such as video surveiliance and internet robot police. Besides, the better education should be put in the first positon in prevent people from crime. The government should raise more fund and budget to the science mentioned above and schools shoud impart related knowledge about law to students.
In conclusion, As we can not fully prevent the occurance of crime, but if the citizens and government work together to pay more attention and take actions on it. I assume the crime rate will decline eventually in the near further.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... criminal issues were reported by media everyday, indicate that such offenece activities...
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Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...thy people commit to crime are complex. but the major two reason are obvious. First...
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Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ich and poor is getting wider and wider everyday in some developing countries. Some yout...
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Line 2, column 546, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'less' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: less
...her factor we have to face is there are more less educated people in some developing coun...
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Line 2, column 902, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...significant role in the proof of crime. As the crime cases are increase fast. We s...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s are increase fast. We should take some effective measures to slow or stop this ...
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Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... students. In conclusion, As we can not fully prevent the occurance of crime, bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95977011494 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48839292569 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7567490098 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8421052632 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15789473684 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151160501104 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523226437142 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409082235053 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103205424576 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286974091929 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.