In many countries, people have more health problems because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle
Why do you think people are living in an unhealthy way?
What can be done about this problem?
Health is more important for all living beings. Unhealthy habits would eradicate our life completely. Nowadays, in most of the countries, people suffer from lot of health problems due to unhealthy lifestyle. This essay will discuss about the reason why people chose an unhealthy way of living and provides solution for the same.
People lead a healthy life in the past by maintaining proper diet and exercise when compared with modern humans. Most of the humans in today's world are lazy which is the reason for the health problems. The invention of new technology and its proliferated utilization made people inactive. For instance, before the lifts and escalators were invented, people used staircase. But now they feel lazy to climb the staircase. Hence, they use the lift to travel form the basement to the first floor in a nine storey building. As a result, medical problems are inevitable due to lack of physical activity and unbalanced diet.
Self-initiative is the good solution to recover from an unhealthy life. People have to take part in innovative programs like fitness class and push themself from the comfort zone. They have to commit themselves to more physical exercises and intake of nutritious food. If they could not change the way of living, it is better to consult a physician. Thus, following the doctors advice and involving in innovative programs could increase the possibility of avoiding medical issues
In conclusion, this essay discussed that laziness was one of the causes for unhealthy way of living and people must to take initiative steps by themselves for a healthy lifestyle.
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Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
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Suggestion:
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Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1553030303 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71708693449 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.5810569204 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0625 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319691728569 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921821319488 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703676354982 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194960852034 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106619419209 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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