You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter• give details of your visit to the restaurant• explain the re

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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter

• give details of your visit to the restaurant

• explain the reason for the celebration

• say what was good about the food and the service

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to thank you for the food and service provided at your restaurant.

Myself and my friends visited your restaurant last sunday afternoon where we had fish biriyani for our meal with a fish platter. We all were happy with the dishes because the taste of the food was good.

As it was my birthday , my friends had different plans to celebrate it but, I decided to celebrate it at your restaurant. Because, I dined at your restaurant once with my family and the dishes were superb, especially the Chicken biriyani. So I wanted my friends to experience the same.

It was the quality and taste of the food which brought me back to your restaurant. The fishes were really fresh and the aroma of the dishes were mouth-watering. Moreover, you gave us an excellent service which includes food on time, clean environment with pleasant music and hospitality of your staff.

We appreciated your services and surly recommend your restaurant to others.

Thank you,

Yours truly,

Felix

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r restaurant to others. Thank you, Yours truly, Felix
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01142857143 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65957649024 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582857142857 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7080751775 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7272727273 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345445267583 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128891734315 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581506585217 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188792309911 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220690566066 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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