In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the automation period, adolescents are either engaged in technical activities or spend long hours on electronic equipment. Consequently, they do not mostly prefer to know about current happening in their country or across the world on paper media or television. This essay will discuss the potential causes of above the notion, along with the remedies to curb it.
To begin with, considering the root causes which may be responsible for turn aside youngster to know about latest update in the globe. First and foremost, in the rivalry era, juveniles have burden to crack competitive examinations, therefore they are indulge to study around the the clock, due to hectic schedule they do not have enough time to open the newspaper. Moreover, young people uses mobile phones to play games and social media like Snapchat, WhatsApp, Facebook and Instagram to chat and enrolling the entertainment activities around the world. To illustrate this, according to a recent study, 90 percent of youths are seen spending their valuable time on social media following their favourite stars, while very few of them are following news channels.
Furthermore, there are some useful remedies to fix this problem. Firstly, guardians should talk about latest topics or watch news channels with their children consequently they will take interest to get complete information about the current issues in the country. To elaborate this, parents are the role model for the youngsters therefore it is a responsibility of the father mother to indulge in useful activities therefore their children follow up. In addition to this, the artist or the writer should be creative while producing the news, so that it will be more interesting to the viewer and reader. A good illustration of this, I get attracted to read a newspaper when the contents of the newspaper are depicted in pictorial form, this might also attract the youngsters, as they are more fascinated by images and pictures.
To conclude, as the news is becoming less popular among the young people in most of the countries. The interest has to be developed among them by their parents and also by the creativity of the artists and writers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: about the latest
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Suggestion: indulged
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12605042017 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75617441801 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7202377389 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121985630121 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406091245561 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028224934547 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703666036844 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190745199813 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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