Many countries want to host international sports events while other think that hosting sports events has more problems than benefits.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that tourism industries are boon for any countries economy, and hosting a international sports events can attract many sport loving tourist. these tourists spends huge money for getting memorable experiences and hence hosting country can have huge amount for foreign currency in their reserves. I completely agree with this notion of belief that such events are beneficial to host country and this essay will advocate my view.
Firstly, the proponents believe that tourist from other countries came here to enjoy and they forget to maintain decency and create problem for local residents. For an instance, these foreign audience will incur huge amount of garbage near the event area and residents of these places find difficult to live in such bad environment. Moreover, such tourist like to consume alcohol and create unnecessary noise pollution as they are drunk. Sometime this drunk foreigners may indulge in crime like drunk and drive and put other's lives in danger.
On the other hand, such foreign tourist will pay huge amount for tickets, accommodation and food. this will create a job opportunities for local people to provide such facility to visitors. along with this, such visitor would like take some of the crafted items along with them as a memory of their visit which will eventually boon for craft industries. For an instance, foreigner who visits the Jaipur to watch international cricket match will always take art and crafted items such as sari, lather footwears and many more items. Furthermore, government earns huge amount from such global events be providing the great ambience to such events. For an example, Abu Dhabi earns huge amount by hosting formula one races.
To conclude, event though foreign visitors do create some problems for local residents but the advantages of hosting such event have more positive impact on host country's economy and raputation. So, I firmly belive that such events are boon for a nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.175 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47391864003 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.92069917 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192358356825 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762044394477 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840934708496 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151847921944 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909909879647 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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