Many parents are unhappy with the amount of violence in video games, TV programs and other leisure activities. How harmful could this be to children? What could be done to solve this problem?
undoubtedly, kids now a days are glued to modern technology in the form of gadgets. It is worrying to many that their children will be affected by increasing violence in these. This essay will discuss the harmful effects of these and what be can done to prevent.
Unfortunately, children with access to screens are spending majority of their time in playing games and watching shows. It is found that violence in games is directly impacting the kids as they tend to mimic the same. One major reason found is rewards for the same are available in a game, which is enhancing them to do in real life too. Their adulthood is largely influenced by things when they were younger. Hence, this affects can be carried to their future too.
Parents should spend their quality time with the child until they reach a stage. More than fifrty percent of this generation students are not doing any kind of physical activity. As a gaurdian, they should encourage them to pick up a hobby like sports, music or any thing which does not involve sedentary lifestyle. This not only helps in reducing time spent on these devices but keeps them active and healthy. Also, rewarding regulary for these activities will boost them further.
This essay discussed the hazardous effects of these devices and how they will shape the future generations. Also, positive reinforcement for doing activities like developing new hobbies, picking up a new sport can change the mindset of kid and also help in avoiding the dangers of the harmful behaviour in them to others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Undoubtedly
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Message: Did you mean 'do' or 'be done'?
Suggestion: do; be done
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Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...o pick up a hobby like sports, music or any thing which does not involve sedentary lifest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88212927757 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49813647673 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1592772789 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193434359022 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684395489407 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621066579165 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122963755603 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558835166782 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.