Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the modernization of people's lives in the world, some families allow their children to live independently. But some believe that children should stay in the family until they are married.l will explain my reasons for both issues in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, living alone has many benefits, such as responsibility and independence for young people.Under these circumstances, young people can use their abilities and find good solutions to their problems. Without getting help from older people.These people can more easily cope with problems when they get married and can make good use of their personal life experiences.And statistics also show that when an open-minded and experienced person starts a new life, he is more successful than the inexperienced person. Because this person has overcome the challenges he has had in the past and is ready to face the new challenges.
On the other hand, it is clear that a person living alone faces many dangers such as bad friends, drug addiction and alcohol.Because a person at this age cannot make a good decision and therefore choose the wrong way.People at this age are most influenced by their friends and sometimes do dangerous things to prove themselves.In fact, most people's decisions are emotional rather than logical.But if young people are in the family, they can use their intellectual and financial support and get the best out of everything.
In conclusion,I believe that each one has its advantages and disadvantages, and it depends on the individual himself how to use his abilities and talents properly under any circumstances.
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also, but, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28076923077 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08330827859 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611538461538 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.207172856 49.4020404114 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.142857143 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1428571429 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154953686143 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640262318326 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046526574418 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829176963937 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048609785242 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.0946893788 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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