Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinion are divided as to how giving students review or judgment to lecturer in class is a way to develop teaching method in high school. Many argue that it is risky when tutors receiving opinions from students could lead to loss of respect in class, others hold that it is a chance for teachers to recognized what they are missing. In this essay, I will discuss the both these view and show only why I am in favour of the latter.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some believe that hearing a opinion from students could come along with some negative review about their teaching method. Teachers always feel their preparation for the lesson is efficient for students by their own method and passion in this job. For example, when a student give feedback to teacher but just mention about why their lesson always boring and sleepy but didn’t try to understand that they have spending so much times to find ways to approach every students in class. However, If lectures decide to take judgments from another students and noted that their method is didn’t meet the requirement for high school so it is an crucial part to take advantage of it.
On the other hand, I am convinced that it is important for teacher take reviews and judgments from students to know what if there still a problem in their teaching method. One reason for this is that teacher need to improve more daily to adapt with students nowadays. For instance, some students they could easily understand the lesson if lecturer can perform it along with opinions from each student to make it more creative and avoiding losing connection with them. At the result, it is a good chance when building a friendly relationship with students when teaching will improve their idea more effectively.
In conclusion, there are good reasons to believe that judgment can some times be a big issue to deal with if it is along with negative way; however, it is my view that it receiving ideas from students always help teacher develop their teaching method in the future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...standable why some believe that hearing a opinion from students could come along ...
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Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...o understand that they have spending so much times to find ways to approach every st...
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Line 2, column 623, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...students and noted that their method is didn’t meet the requirement for high school ...
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Line 2, column 676, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...he requirement for high school so it is an crucial part to take advantage of it. ...
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Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elop their teaching method in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73521126761 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41980848838 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478873239437 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1082162258 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.083333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5833333333 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197494945564 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883852725672 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348935758893 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136868426556 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594817567353 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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