Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays this is no longer true. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is considered that studying in academic is the most efficiency method to gain success in the future, while others believe that this statement university is not take an vital role to become successful. In this essay, I will discuss both these views and show why I am in favour of the former/latter
On the one hand, it is understandable why some believe that academic degree are not being an important role in our life. People have changed their mind when they saw many possibility chance to become outstanding in their career. For example, a person could decide to get directly after they graduated in high school so they will have a chance to work earlier rather than take too much time to study in university and still earn more in both knowledge and financial in the future. However when taking a chance to face outside world when too young that also be very risky if you do not recognized what is your potential ability.
On the other hand, I am convinced that nothing could be replace by have a certificate in university. One reason for this is that have experienced in academic environment help us gain a large of knowledge for our major. For example, a student getting over high-school and university will be next step for them in order to help them to identify which career major could appropriate for their future. Another reason that not only university could assist you take advantages in your future but also an easiest way to support your skill in order to reach an successful in your future career.
Inconclusion, there are good reasons to believe that always have a chance for everyone decide to find out others way more efficiently than spend time at academic. However, it is my view that university degrees is the best way to help student gain success in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t this statement university is not take an vital role to become successful. In thi...
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Line 2, column 481, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... knowledge and financial in the future. However when taking a chance to face outside wo...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...take advantages in your future but also an easiest way to support your skill in or...
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Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...to support your skill in order to reach an successful in your future career. Inco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70700636943 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59356925584 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531847133758 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3003687339 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200140290828 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791386641426 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550029468346 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132074526799 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307526515227 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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