Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays it has been widely argued that social networking sites, for example:- Facebook, Instagram, have had immense amount of adverse impact on our society and on individuals. As far as think, I am totally Disagreed with this statement. I believe these sites are beneficial for our society and for our people.
To begin with, these networking site connect people with each other.One can became friend of anyone in the world and can start conversation with them through this platforms. For instance:- a person in Canada can talk to his relatives or friends who is living anywhere in world within a second either by video call, text or by voice messages. In addition to that, for business in society these sites are best platform for advertisement, as the consumer interaction on these platforms are much higher than the other. Moreover, these sites are way cheaper than the traditional way of commercials. Last but not the least, these networking sites are also beneficial for students they can connect to many former students, or professor online and can get there help when they need during any education related problem.
However, these sites also have some unfortunate consequences. Personal and private data can easily been hacked on these websites and can share on internet which results in financial and mental loss to personal life. cyber bullying is also a major issue where few people had been bullied by other because of their religion, colour and gender. A lots of fake account also been created in name of other to share their personal pictures on internet that's an another example of cyber bullying
In conclusion, Although there are bunch of disadvantages of the social networking, but the advantage of these sites can simply overweight them. Media networks like these made our world smaller, virtually than what it was in past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: One
...ing site connect people with each other.One can became friend of anyone in the worl...
^^^
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...an start conversation with them through this platforms. For instance:- a person in C...
^^^^
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cyber
...ncial and mental loss to personal life. cyber bullying is also a major issue where fe...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: A lot; Lots
...e of their religion, colour and gender. A lots of fake account also been created in na...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...are their personal pictures on internet thats an another example of cyber bullying ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an example' or 'another example'.
Suggestion: an example; another example
...eir personal pictures on internet thats an another example of cyber bullying In conclusion, Alt...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
Suggestion: bunches
...ng In conclusion, Although there are bunch of disadvantages of the social networki...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...rld smaller, virtually than what it was in past.
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtually than what it was in past.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10163934426 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62934466602 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6158287425 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.692307692 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149421490665 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580794930794 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526137166788 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999796121562 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507616248852 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.