Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this? Do you think is a good thing or bad thing?
People these days are extremely concern about their physical appearance and they always try to be young and active. Their are numerous factors which lead to this behavior. People may have differing view points, but I believe that it is a positive development and has various advantages.
The principal reasons for pursuing external beauty is competition and acceptability. In this competitive world in order to have successful life, looking young, vibrant and active is the necessity. For instant, if somebody is appearing for job interview no doubt skill and capability will the prime factor, but personality also plays the major role. People whom have smart outer appearance will definitely stand out from the crowd. Moreover, society easily accept the people pleasant outer demeanor. They will have wider social circle as we are living in contemporary world where outer appearance is more vital than inner beauty. Therefore, in order to be the part of the world one needs to have more conscious about their looks.
This trend of looking young has myriads of benefits. It is helpful in cultivating many healthy habits among the masses. Eating balanced diet is becoming popular among youth in order to have proper body mass index, because undoubtedly it is helpful in having good physique, which will enhance their outer appearance. People are becoming fitness freak these days. Gyms are becoming popular in almost all the country of the world. For example, the number of gym in India has raised to 5 times in last 2 years. Staying fit will ultimately helpful in overcoming many health issue and we will be having healthier nations. Hence, this run of looking young comes with many advantages.
In conclusion, no doubt physical beauty play a major role and is extremely important in todays world. If we want to grow in life we have to follow the trend. In addition, this wish to look young came with many positive habits which will gift the world with active and healthy citizens
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0303030303 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51901127717 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7275931661 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0476190476 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146884865313 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482129078039 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367144216203 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980797389742 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377784042198 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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