Modern technology such as personal computers and the Internet have made it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of the time instead of going to an office every day What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this situ

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Modern technology, such as personal computers and the Internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of the time instead of going to an office every day. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

Modern technology has changed the world in more ways than one. Computers not only make our calculations easier, but when coupled with the internet, they have also made it possible for people to work remotely, away from their office’s physical location. This, however, comes with a set of associated advantages and limitations, which are elaborated upon in the following paragraphs.
The advantages of working from home are aplenty. For many people, showing up to work is half the battle since their commute has a lot of traffic, which makes them mentally and physically tired even before reaching the office. Working from home would result in lesser traffic jams which is more environmentally friendly. It saves money, since one wouldn’t have to fill up as much fuel for their vehicles. Employees can take care of personal matters without having to take a vacation day or having their salary cut. In times like the Coronavirus pandemic, working from home is most prudent so that many people aren’t infected easily, thereby helping ease the burden on the healthcare system.
On the flip side, the internet may sometimes have low speeds, resulting in delays during important meetings. Increased screen time from working at home could result in deterioration of eye health and the release of UV rays from computers could also damage the brain in the long term. Most importantly, people lose the social aspect of work if they decide to work from home. The physical interactions during team meetings or the banter between colleagues during lunch and coffee breaks are just as important as doing the assigned work. Modern technology cannot simulate these social interactions.
While the use of modern technology to work from home can save time, money, be environmentally friendly and have the ability to curb the spread of infections, it can also result in deterioration of one’s health and loss of socialization with friends and colleagues. Hence, it is up to the individuals to consider both advantages and limitations before deciding to work from home.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15820895522 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75732686031 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591044776119 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9066876013 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342139208894 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108237977425 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535381809912 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203697794187 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335628978773 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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