Nowadays , reading has been the passion for many people and they enjoy reading books most. However, there are a plethora of sources of reading came into existence since a decade ago. It has been observed that a large segment of people prioritise online reading rather than manual. In this essay, I will shed light on the causes and how this is shutting libraries to the brink of extinction?
To kick off , there are a variety of forces that drive this issue and one of them is the advent of internet. In other words , internet has made this trend convenient as any person can discover even the unusual book in no time. For example , if a person is desiring to read a book based on sports person , he would rather go online than commuting around city in search of the book. The other reason of this development is the fragility of paper books . This means paper books need to be hold with care while reading else it would turn out. Besides, it is apparent that with each passing year, papers of books turn pale and gradually become futile.
It is not exaggeration to say that outbreak of ebooks has hit the libraries badly. In coming years, this will adversely affect the employees of the library and many of the valuable books will go to win. Moreover, the less visit of readers would be a threat to the maintenance of libraries. As a result, if this ritual of ebooks continuous , libraries will lose its significance soon and become obsolete.
To recapitulate, according to above preceding discussion, I cast no doubt that ebooks are dominating the manual books. However , this can be curbed by associating some reasonable charge on each online available book. On the other hand ,libraries should be rehabilitated timely to make it a alluring point for readers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, no doubt, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74592833876 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56987999618 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57328990228 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.5379065495 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.7058823529 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297834519756 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894803241496 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534086183142 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169405551232 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472266889838 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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