More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries.
Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, a plethora number of children are prone to a disease known as "Obesity". This has been caused due to various reasons which also given negative impacts on children's life. The purpose of this essay is to surround the problems and gather all the informative details in order to then discuss.
Apparently, the effect of increasing weight on children has been caused by the technological advancements in modern society which can be substantiated for many reasons. The first reason is that many children nowadays spend extra hours on electronic devices such as computers, smartphones, and PlayStations. They are more involved in the virtual world activities such as browsing on the internet social media websites, playing video games, and watching movies or series on Television or on mobile phones Another reason is the attraction of fast foods in society. Many people including children are involved in developing unhealthy eating habits which directly increase body weight and eventually, a child becomes overweight if they do not follow a healthy balanced diet in their lives. According to a BBC survey, seventy percent of the teens' population in the USA have been affected by obesity.
Due to the above reasons, there are effects with this impact on the society, especially in youngsters. Many children are becoming lethargic or less active because of over body weight. With this effect, they develop some other problems such increase in stress while doing their daily work. They could not perform well in their academics as more weight in the body decrease the concentration power and focus of a child because his or her mind will be more involved in eating fast foods such as Chips, Maggie, and Burgers. With such effect, a country will not develop more young sports talents because in the field of sports a person should be physically fit and healthy. And, playing sports for a country has its own symbol status in society which can be only followed by staying fit, active and eating a healthy diet which cannot be observed nowadays in the new generation.
By way of conclusion, obesity has become a major problem in modern society which has given drastic effects, especially on younglings. Therefore, a person should have the self-determination to follow a good healthy eating habit, so, in that case, they can lead to success in their lives. As the quote says " Eat healthy to lead a happy long life".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 836, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teens'' or 'teen's'?
Suggestion: teens'; teen's
...to a BBC survey, seventy percent of the teens population in the USA have been affecte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11194029851 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79921052528 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539800995025 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.173883824 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.882352941 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6470588235 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202577088918 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641047492717 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462752381351 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117979461619 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531362143783 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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