More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
In olden days once people get married they would start having kids. But in recent days people are not willing to have children at young age because they focus in earning money and this creates more impacts in their life.
Firstly, in the past men go to work and women look after of their children and the household chores. The money earned was good enough to run the family. They could save more money even though there was expenditures. Over the years, the income of a single person was not sufficient to maintain the family expenses. Luxury has become a basic need nowadays. For instance, people buy a car to live a first class life in the past. But now, more than 70 percent of the people are using cars as it becomes a need.
In order to over come such problems both husband and wife started to go for work and earn more money where they can enjoy their life without children for certain period of time and then think about having a baby in future. Before that if they have a child their future goals are affected and they cannot save enough money. But the future cannot be predicted because there will be some drawbacks such as late pregnancy or other health problems in giving birth. There are so many couples facing such problems over the years.
In conclusion, people should have children at the right age. They should not procrastinate child-birth for their own concern. Money is important for life but one must stop running behind it always.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...their life without children for certain period of time and then think about having a baby in f...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...time and then think about having a baby in future. Before that if they have a child their...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ife but one must stop running behind it always.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59770114943 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13756021997 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8371619725 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216958385851 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071714218663 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760409332012 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145103619338 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519790138906 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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