Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Having a chance of being parents after some years of marriage has become possible due to the existence of various medical treatments. In fact, this practice support to the nation’s economy very well.
Being educated it is an obligation of every citizen to contribute their services towards their country so that they can spend stress-free life. Nowadays overpopulation is one of the major issues, for my country where per capita income is very low. In this condition, if the married couple will think about family planning then they can help to release the pressure of population from society. Late child or only one child is the best option. To illustrate excess people means extra consumption of available resources which may result in depletion of natural resources like fossil fuels, water, mineral and so on and expansion in the rate of inflation. Hence less birth of the children will favour raising the standard of living.
Saying, no to own child or late child can promote the practice of adopting orphan children, who need parents for their care and education. For example, in a survey report, it showed that every year authorities spend 25% of the national income to run orphan care centres so that they can get free education, meal and jobs. Therefore, if people will become the guardian of orphan children then they will incur on their studies, food and career from their own income and that portion of national income can be spent in some other required sectors like medical, insurance and many more.
Conclusively, now youngsters have understood that there are so many other responsibilities after wedding except pregnancy which need more attention like elder care, own house, job settlement and financial sources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 653, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...and expansion in the rate of inflation. Hence less birth of the children will favour ...
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Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ng the standard of living. Saying, no to own child or late child can promote ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14736842105 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62207406293 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2605433102 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170882236703 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574302516197 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365201740657 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859772634846 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542834493816 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.