In our world today, many people need things to be done instantly for them. This is because they believe that the era of technological inventions has made it possible. It is a positive development, in my opinion, so I will discuss further in the body paragraphs.
The main reason why individuals want things to be done immediately is because the invention of technology has made it a possibility. In other words, the invention of the internet helps companies carry out services swiftly such as delivery. Similarly, the mobile phone is an invention that has made it possible to get various informations across to second parties instantly. Clearly, more and more people would want things to be done instantly for them given that technology has made that instant service a reality.
On the other hand, when things are done fast even if it is impromptu is a good development, and I will explain them ahead. Firstly, when you call your bank customer care, they receive your information, and act on it immediately. This solves the issue of going to your service provider physically. Secondly, tasks like transferring money to relations can be done on the spot, and this task can be carriwd out on a bank app. Therefore, it is indeed a positive development if things can be done instantly.
To conclude, individual people love to achieve a task or service instantly, and this is because they know that technology has made it achievable, so to this end, I can comfortably say that I believe its development is a positive one.
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- You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for Write a letter to your manager to apologize for this absence In your letter Tell your manager what event it was Say how important the event was State the reasons for your absence 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86923076923 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90878083003 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526923076923 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9382562941 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3846153846 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328822409734 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106853245618 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837742457656 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184725906592 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523829624909 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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