Nowdays young people spend a lot of their time in shopping malls some people believe this could have A negative effect on young people and society in general ?.To what extent do you agree or disagree .

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...mparative part of humanity in todays era ,most of adults utilize entire time in sh...
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...arative part of humanity in todays era ,most of adults utilize entire time in shopping placese...
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...utilize entire time in shopping placeses . However, opponents qurrel that it could...
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...sters as well as community in the future , eventhough it is waste of time and mone...
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...venthough it is waste of time and money also . In this following essay i will ennun...
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...hough it is waste of time and money also . In this following essay i will ennunic...
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... time and money also . In this following essay i will ennunicate my view before r...
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...end of shopping rapidly raise day by day , most of young indviduals spend often ti...
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... of shopping rapidly raise day by day , most of young indviduals spend often time in shopping...
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...e day by day , most of young indviduals spend often time in shopping malls as well as in re...
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...shopping malls as well as in restaurants . There is plethero of reasons behind it ...
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.... There is plethero of reasons behind it , firstly , adults are obessed regarding ...
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... plethero of reasons behind it , firstly , adults are obessed regarding shopping ...
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..., firstly , adults are obessed regarding shopping and they attract towards new fa...
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...ing and they attract towards new fashion ,trend also .Most of citizens spend enoug...
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...they attract towards new fashion ,trend also .Most of citizens spend enough wealth i...
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... attract towards new fashion ,trend also .Most of citizens spend enough wealth ins...
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...ttract towards new fashion ,trend also .Most of citizens spend enough wealth inspite...
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...ttract towards new fashion ,trend also .Most of citizens spend enough wealth inspite of does not...
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...of does not matter where money come from . For instance , there are several girls ...
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...ter where money come from . For instance , there are several girls buying trendy ,...
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... , there are several girls buying trendy , expensive items which are like a black ...
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...ve items which are like a black elephant .they are buying things willing for show ...
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...illing for show of it to for her friends . On the other hand , youngsters spend...
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...o for her friends . On the other hand , youngsters spend quality of time for sh...
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...te they do not have time for voluntering , education and family also, which is con...
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...s considerable a Waste of time and money ,the more time they use for these type of...
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...me they use for these type of activities , additionally , less precious to study s...
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... these type of activities , additionally , less precious to study so that is why t...
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...y they face difficulties regarding study .Moreover , they have not enough time for...
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...they face difficulties regarding study .Moreover , they have not enough time for family ...
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...e difficulties regarding study .Moreover , they have not enough time for family an...
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...t enough time for family and voluntering ,but a greater amount of time in shopping...
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...me in shopping and weekends with friends .It is more sensible think for young indv...
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...ties which are crucial for bright future . To conclude , i believe that young p...
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...ucial for bright future . To conclude , i believe that young people should spen...
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...al for bright future . To conclude , i believe that young people should spend ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as for, for instance, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93506493506 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55541909198 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532467532468 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.61011847 49.4020404114 388% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.0 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.25 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207075383657 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095748605367 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837511701359 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149962100509 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764078690218 0.056905535591 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.