Nowdays young people spend a lot of their time in shopping malls some people believe this could have A negative effect on young people and society in general ?.
To what extent do you agree or disagree .
It is undeniable fact that shopping is an imparative part of humanity in today's era ,most of adults utilize entire time in shopping placeses . However, opponents qurrel that it could have a negative impact on youngsters as well as community in the future , eventhough it is waste of time and money also . In this following essay i will ennunicate my view before reaching conclusion.
To commence with, the trend of shopping rapidly raise day by day , most of young indviduals spend often time in shopping malls as well as in restaurants . There is plethero of reasons behind it , firstly , adults are obessed regarding shopping and they attract towards new fashion ,trend also .Most of citizens spend enough wealth inspite of does not matter where money come from . For instance , there are several girls buying trendy , expensive items which are like a black elephant .they are buying things willing for show of it to for her friends .
On the other hand , youngsters spend quality of time for shopping and gathering eating in malls despite they do not have time for voluntering , education and family also, which is considerable a Waste of time and money ,the more time they use for these type of activities , additionally , less precious to study so that is why they face difficulties regarding study .Moreover , they have not enough time for family and voluntering ,but a greater amount of time in shopping and weekends with friends .It is more sensible think for young indvidual they spend time on study and family so they gain own knowledge from regarding book as for as with their family and doing different activities which are crucial for bright future .
To conclude , i believe that young people should spend less time in shopping mall centers, because it is waste of time and money because it has negative impact of adults
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as for, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93506493506 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55541909198 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532467532468 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.61011847 49.4020404114 388% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.0 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.25 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207075383657 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095748605367 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837511701359 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149962100509 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764078690218 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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