one of the most pressing problems facing world today is overpopulation. what policies do you believe governments should adopt to address the causes and effects of this problem
It is no doubt true that globally population is increasing at an alarming rate. Authorities has to take effective measures and has come with strong guidelines in order to curb the situation. Their are numerous adverse outcome due to continuously growth of population.
The problem of overpopulation can be easily overcome, if government make strong rules and try to properly implement them. Tax on having one than one child can be made as a law. It will deter people to have another offspring and most of them will plan only one child. Moreover, it will generate income for the country which can be utilize for development of the area and in other social activities. Apart from this state can organise various camps to educate the people about the negative outcomes of accelerating population. Seminars and programmes at public places like, schools, colleges and garden must be conducted which will tell the individuals about the advantages of family planning. Therefore, by forcing law and spreading awareness problem can be tackled to huge extend.
Growing population will have enormous negative outcome. The major drawbacks are unemployment and scarcity of resources. Natural resources are available in limited quantity, if people keeps on increasing as present trend their will be definitely have to live extremely bad life. Food is being produced in limited quantity, feeding huge masses will become a problem in future. In addition, cities are becoming overcrowded, space to live is nor readily available. For instant, people have started to live apartment and falts due to lack of space. If speed of growth of masses will be like this, one day earth will not be able to accommodate them. Apart from this, problem of unemployment is mainly because of availbilty of more than required applicants for a particular job. Present rate of unemployment in India is a matter of grave concern, despite of qualification youth is facing difficulty to get the work.
In conclusion, undoubtedly overpopulation is major issue world is facing today, and it has various disadvantages, which will hamper the growth. This hard situation can be handled by coming with effective strategies to have control on growing people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, as to, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20111731844 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8967059572 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578212290503 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3342741211 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0476190476 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117016769078 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349481447172 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346313424738 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724271249238 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033586245312 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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