people sleep less than before in many countries why do people sleep less what effect does it have on an individual and on society

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people sleep less than before in many countries why do people sleep less what effect does it have on an individual and on society

Mankind is spending less time to take a siesta and this pattern can be observed in majority of countries. There are many reasons for this, such as increased sources of entertainment. However, this practice is harmful for an individual's health and society. This essay will discuss reasons of shorter sleep and its effects on persons and society.

To begin with, advent of plethora of entertainment devices are keeping everyone engrossed. The entertainment devices such as televisions and over the top media, provide a lot of programs which are ranging from comedy to horror and two other web series. So, instead of spending time in sleeping to cut out boredom, they can watch these programs and entertain themselves. For example, if a person is feeling very, then a good comedy program on television can bring him out of malaise. Secondly, the recent trend of working for long hours in jobs, uses of the time when one could have slept sufficiently. indeed, when a person works in a call centre job, it is hard to find two doors for the designated hours.

As a result, such patterns of work and rest are detrimental to an individual and the collective. At an individual level, it causes long-term health issues, which do not surface initially, yet become symptomatic in the form of raised blood pressure and obesity. Additionally, when such people work together as a society, the overall efficiency of given task diminishes. It is a well-known fact that activity levels are low when body is not well rested. This is seen in a clear example, where an aeroplane met with an accident and later it was found out that pilot had to work for long houra and had not slept properly. Aftermath of this accident, the entire fleet of passengers succumbed to the injuries. Certainly, such accidents, which are a result of lack of sleep, are troublesome to society.

In conclusion, sleep is essential for normal functioning of people and society and its deficiency is harmful to us in several ways. I believe that although one cannot give away the sources that are leading to loss of sleep, at least one can take a deliberate effort to spend enough time towards sleep. it seems a well spent sleeping schedule will lead all to a happy life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8407310705 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72188672001 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574412532637 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2296333632 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180893869888 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491658185336 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412075039839 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108331973412 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505866167256 0.056905535591 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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