Some people say that fashion affects our lives in a negative way. However, others say that is has more positive effects on our lives.
Discuss and give your opinion
The jury is out when it comes to fads. It is difficult to decide whether the current trends impact us either positively or negatively. It can be said that fashion brightens up our lives, but too much of it will leave us wandering.
On the one hand, being brand conscious offers a great deal of benefits. Firstly, a person, who observes latest trends, gets a lot of attention. Attention means appreciation, hence, when a person is lauded, he feels positive and becomes happy. Secondly, fashion opens a lot of gateways for earning money. For example, fashion designing, which is a creative pursuit, can be used to setup a boutique and become self-employed. In fact, it is generally noted that people who are academically poor, perform well in such artistic skills and turn out to be successful in life.
On the other hand, aimless chasing of fashion can be delirious. Any hobby such as this requires a judicious and planned approach. If followed blindly, it can lead to instability in financial prospects. This is because; fashion is not a mainstream career. In addition, people do whatsoever to look beautiful which can be detrimental to their health. For example, many girls undertake extreme dieting without knowing the negative effect which it can have on their body.
To conclude, I think fashion brings positivity and vitality in our life. However, mindless pursuit of the same can alter the way of life. As it is rightly said that excess of anything is bad, therefore, balancing the act seems to be the right approach to me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'observes the latest'.
Suggestion: observes the latest
...eal of benefits. Firstly, a person, who observes latest trends, gets a lot of attention. Attent...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
...hich is a creative pursuit, can be used to setup a boutique and become self-employed. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90421455939 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76067930851 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3013023702 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.1111111111 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13599769322 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406237001564 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451591179945 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851706825689 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281338165474 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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