City Development Survey
You live in a small town of 10,000 people. A large green area in the centre of town is undeveloped. The city has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like to have built in that area. Write a survey response supporting your views on recreational area.
I support the view of utilizing the undeveloped area and convert it to recreational park. This is going to be beneficial to the people of the area in numerous ways.
To begin with, the proposal of sports complex is a great idea. This town, being small does not have much employment opportunity, however, the youth are generally very good at different kind of sports. These individuals lack a dedicated playground and because of this, they are unable to play. Moreover, a play ground could provide them with an opportunity to become a rising star as they will become talented if they play daily. Therefore, sports complex is a must have feature for this town.
Secondly, if there is no green area, then the area is effected badly with pollution. This indicates that a wide stretch of green land will add to the town's brawny point. This is because the lush green trees and other such flora will absorb the pollutants and keep it at bay. In addition, greenery will invite various insects and birds, resulting in overall increase in fauna, thus adding to the beauty of the place.
Finally, a small petting zoo is required to be built so that if not domesticated animal, pet animals can find home for themselves and get the desired shelter and food, hence not left astray.
All in all , I suggest recreational area is the need of an hour and establishment of such facility at the earliest will be highly appreciated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 470, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'featured'.
Suggestion: featured
...herefore, sports complex is a must have feature for this town. Secondly, if there is n...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ood, hence not left astray. All in all , I suggest recreational area is the need...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, in addition, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60906727586 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623481781377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7766326634 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138956101814 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504261585804 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406446770217 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072318542551 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263656226816 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.