People spend too much money on family celebrations such as birthdays and weddings. What is the importance of these celebrations? Do you think people really spend too much?
Individuals invest a large amount of money on family occasions such as birthdays and marriage ceremonies. This essay will discuss that these events are crucial for reuniting with relatives and friends, and I believe that people are spending more than the financial budget that often lands them in huge financial debts.
Traditional events play an essential role in the lives of people because it enables them to socialize with their peers. Nowadays, people tend to live a busiest and ever occupied life because of the time limit and tight deadlines, these gatherings help them to spend leisure time with their loved ones. As a result, they would be able to interact with different members of the extended family, which is beneficial for their social development. For example, in India majority of the population organises grand parties to celebrate their special days because they feel that it is an excellent way to invite guests to their house.
Due to the availability of high disposable income, men and women spend an exorbitant amount of funds while planning luxurious events to reflect their wealthiness. In other words, celebrations are more considered as a way to showcase wealth to other people instead of showing love and affection. Consequently, it also influences guest negatively because it put pressurise low earing families to follow the same trend and this persuades them to take huge loans for these events. For instance, in many Asian countries, an average family tends to spend a massive amount on these functions and it cost them more than several million, which is beyond their savings.
In conclusion, although organising get-together to mark the occasion benefits masses to inculcate family skills, its negative impact on the whole society can not be undermined. I maintain that adults should only spend a sufficient amount that lies between their financial capabilities because showing off leads them to suffer myriad fund crises.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ir peers. Nowadays, people tend to live a busiest and ever occupied life because ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68670851048 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.050882775 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158350930128 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602726880201 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035796422057 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101134334774 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417015254339 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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