A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this century, technology is the one how maintain a balanced life in medicine world. These days we should not be scare for a cough like in the past. This essay will contain my conception about this topic on the following and examples.
Firstly, as human-being, we are different, some people are very sensitive and get easily a various type of viruses which affect their body condition not to mention about mental issues after that. However even if we try to prevent that issue and spending more time being preoccupied to stay healthy, sometimes it will happens anyway. To put in another way it is the government responsibility to help the citizen in suffer and give them the condition to reduce the number of deaths.
Secondly, to be honest even if the technology evolved considerably over the year chances to get disease increased because nowadays the air is more toxic than ever inasmuch as many factory's smoke pollute the whole environment. For instance I would like to tell about Chernobyl accident and how one decision causes over 100 deaths and over 9000 cases with thyroid cancer.
On the other hand, i think everybody knows the conception of "healthy mind in a healthy body". In other words to reduce the chances of getting disease we have to beware what are we eating, we need to make sport to keep our body health. To give an ilustrations to reduce the pollution and help the government deal with this problem we can cycling or use the public transport instead of driving. In this way you kill two birds with one shot. In my point of view the government can not control this pollution situation alone, so they have to organize some events for counties to teach them about recycling. Furthermore you don't have to move mountains, by your example and with your little gesture your life will become health and help the environment.
All things considered, it seems obviously that we have to cooperate to each other to stay healthy and to live in a spotless environment.
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- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their was 56
- In recent years, Many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.Is this a positive or a negative development? 56
- A successful person is one who earns a lot of money. To what extend do you agree or dissagree? 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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...ndition to reduce the number of deaths. Secondly, to be honest even if the tech...
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...s. Secondly, to be honest even if the technology evolved considerably over...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cycle'
Suggestion: cycle
...overnment deal with this problem we can cycling or use the public transport instead of ...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion:
...become health and help the environment. All things considered, it seems obviousl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84593023256 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63109499976 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584302325581 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4824937178 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143827774049 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464511393342 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372908624902 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0595863661705 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582739940223 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.