At the present time, the population of some countries include a large number of young adults compared to the number of older people. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The demographic graph of any country is bound to change over a period of time. In the current times, population of adults have highly exceeded the older people. For me this particular trend comes with almost the same amount of merits as well as demerits. As both can be equally functional and productive for a society. Since age is no bar to judge the contributiveness of a person
One of the main disadvantages of the society which amasses with youngsters is that the society has the population which is less experienced. Older people have more experience as compare to the younger ones and therefore they are highly skilled in their field. For instance, professors in universities become more skilled in their teaching abilities as more as the spent time teaching a particular subject. Secondly, older people provide balance to the societies in terms of family support. They can take care of little children at home in the times of need and they also can provide emotional support in the times of difficulties for example many Indian working couples have benefited through joint family system which comprises of three generations staying under one roof, so that parents can meet with their job aspirations. So though Indians of late are abound in youth they give credit to their elders for extending their unconditional support.
However, there are some advantages of the society which has abundant adults. As they are more robust and filled with enthusiasm to generate new ideas. Younger people have more physical strength as compare to the older people and therefore they can be more productive for the companies for the purpose of earning money. Moreover, younger people have the ability to work on new ideas and thus there are more chances that they can bring innovation and improvements to the conventional systems of the are being done by younger students as they are highly interested in technological change. economy which can be beneficial for the country’s success. For instance, according to a survey conduct by the world trade organization, majority of the innovations are being carried out by younger students as they are highly interested in technological change. Which has put their countries on the world map.
In conclusion, less number of older people could be disadvantageous for the countries in term of lack of experience and less family support, would certainly prove to be a major deterrent in their growth and for some countries an increase in the number of younger workforce with a splendid set of new ideas could be equally advantageous
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hly interested in technological change. Which has put their countries on the world ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07294117647 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84266651952 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487058823529 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.9 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.4219433395 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.777777778 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6111111111 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14017446243 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048434709355 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526036854075 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101310134323 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465932100198 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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